Tuesday, December 13, 2011

heritage poem

Beautiful necklace beautiful necklace
O how I love you
Necklace necklace
Been passed down for years
So help me be good to you
Necklace necklace
You feel my heart with love
Necklace necklace
You’re so shiny with a touch of gold,
Necklace necklace
Pure with gold we all love you
Beautiful necklace beautiful necklace

Friday, December 9, 2011

Monkeys monkeys
Monkeys through things
Monkeys monkeys
Don’t like you
Monkeys monkeys
Do like pooh,
Monkeys monkeys monkeys
Don’t monkey buisness me.

Monday, December 5, 2011

hearts

Hearts, hearts beautiful hearts,
Hearts are big strong barks.
Dogs, dogs bark when they feel it in there hearts,
People, people have love in there hearts, but not when they get bitten by a shark.

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Pumpkin pie, pumpkin pie
O how we love pumpkin pie
Don’t you just like pumpkin pie?
Pumpkin pie


Grandparents, grandparents
O how we love you
Goodies and treats you spoil us with to.
Thank you
Thank you for thanksgiving
Thank you for my mom who cares
Thank you for my dad who teaches me.
Thank you for my house that keeps a roof over my head
Thank you for my sister that loves me.
Thank you for my family,
Thank you for my Grandparents,
And most of all thank you for my food

Thursday, November 17, 2011

Poems

Today we began a poetry unit. I think poetry is just a different type of writing that is boring and lovey dovey, yuck. I personality don’t like poetry.
WE read love that dog by Sharon Creech.
Pause #1: Anybody can write poetry it just takes time and effort. I can do it but don’t I like it.
Pause #2: you can write about anything even your pet, but even if you don’t have one write about an animal. Just watch what you’re looking at.
Pause #3: you might not understand any kind of poetry, but you should ask some one. Plus is always good to get a new dog.
Pause #4: you can make poetry so cool if you try. NEVER take anything with out asking. A dog is always a good friend!
Pause #5: Writers always are busy, but they can at least answer one.  I wouldn’t reckamend writing to them if you don’t have a reason
Pause#6: typing classes are the best to have because lots of jobs have typing involved. It might make kids sad, but also wowed because its such a good poem.

End: when you right a poem you should always have a wonderful start and a sad or happy ending. Don’t ever think your work is not good enough for people to see. Its always fun for a writer to see kids writing.

Jack got his inspiration from Walter d. Meyers books and words and he used what was around him. Also he use his own life.

Her is my poem inspiration by love that dog.

Otis
Skinny, cute
Playful, cuddly, lovable
Active, clean, hiper,furry, strong
Brave Otis